A girl who sees the past
One summer night, a girl was walking in the woods."Jessy! Jessy!" called her mother. Jessy turned around and saw her mother standing in the middle of the road. Jessy said to her mother, "Go back to your house! I'll be back in a few seconds!" But her mother said that "I'll be waiting here!" Jessy turned back to see the stars in the cool night air. There were many lightening bugs around the forest. Jessy climbed the trees and went deep in to the woods. She touched the trees. And some other oaks that were beside her. Just then, something a slithering thing was being touched by her hand. She screamed but a moment later, she looked closely at it. She saw a green slithering marble. It was shinning and glowing very brightely in green color. She touched very gently from side to side.
Just then, the wind began to blow, the trees started to shake. Suddenly, everything stopped. All was still except for her. She climbed down the trees and found her mother calling her again. "Jessy, Jessy!" and Jessy said "I'm going!" But she kept calling her. So she quickly went beside her but she didn't watch her. She was watching the other place. So Jessy looked toward the place she is looking right now. There she saw the person who was just the same as her comming toward her. Just then, before she knew it, the car was comming toward them. Her mother's voice cried out, was found dead. Jessy saw all this and was shocked and she fainted.
When she woke up she found herself sitting up on the trees. She climbed down the trees and her mother called "Jessy, Jessy!" and Jessy said "I'm going!" Before she knew it, her mother got crushed by the car. After this, she was really sad. She pulled out the green marble she found in the woods. She rubbed it again .
This is a good story. I like the suspense you create before the three endings. You should add pictures to your blog as well.
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